by edmittance
Question by Rachel: Would you keep reading?
and also give me any editing suggestions please as well!!
Her feet felt heavy against the pavement as she left her stance in front of the gates. Following a step behind the black blob she jammed her hands into her pockets for some warmth. The sky had an hour or so before it would fall completely dark so she was quickly becoming impatient. Her and the black blob moved slowly but weren't stopping, "Charlie, would you say you enjoy
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