by Truus, Bob & Jan too!
Question by HP Wombat: How's my writing? Would you read a story like this?
This is an edited version of a writing exercise from last week. My goal was to make it less of an "exercise" and closer to the beginnings of an actual story. Are any parts confusing? Does anything make you go "that's dumb"? Please be specific! Thanks for reading!
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Meredith Staple loved dating, but hated first dates. She was ten minutes late, had rolled a high-heeled ankle, tore her
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