Q&A: How do you like my novel so far?

Question by impossiblegal4ever: How do you like my novel so far?
This is a part from my novel, in the middle :) I'd like your honest opinions thanks!
"What are you doing here, you said that you didn't ever want to see me

again. What the hell are you doing here?" I yelled at him. He had always made

fun of me, almost all of my life, it was a goddamn battle with him. Now he

wanted to be my knight in shinning armor? "You're really confusing." I noted.

He looked at me and chuckled, he was

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