Jumat, 10 Juni 2011

HELP!!!NEEDED!!!PLEASE!!!?

Question by Mariah: HELP!!!NEEDED!!!PLEASE!!!?
Hi,
i am doing an english discursive essay in school we were told to pick any topic we would like to write about to argue. so i picked "mobile phones"and i want to know what are the disadvantages and advantages using mobile phones and “what u can do to change it to make it safer”.
This is what I wrote so far in (these are just notes, not the essay):

Advantages:
you can carry a mobile phone with you so you don't miss important calls

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